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Bastien is a really fresh character who takes a job, and takes it to be his entire being.

I like

• His design
• His carefree attitude
• His demeanor when speaking to other people
• His caring attitude
• His RP-er

I dislike

• How delusional he is, I think at some point he should stop being so oblivious and realize what’s going around him sometimes, not ALL the time though. Him being delusional sometimes provides a good story.
• His mysterious past, he’ll talk about his performing around the world but we fail to really get any backstory besides that.
• His relationship with Sofia, honestly it makes no sense, they are cute as friends but I don’t see Bastien being in a relationship. (sorry)

Adelia is one character I’d like to see a lot of stuff happen to. She’s got a lot of cool features to her I think you could do things with.

I like

• Her underlying thoughts during RP
• Her tone of voice
• Her backstory
• Her effort in challenges
• Her denial of feelings
• Her design

I dislike

• How she doesn’t trust many people. It would be good to see her start making some actually genuine friends that could help her grow as a character, they might turn their backs on her if she opens up but I doubt they would hate her for it.
• Her lack of evil moments in the writing, she should be getting more bold with each approaching challenge.
• Her motives are unclear, I would like a very clear idea of what she would do in more situations. She’s such a darling villain she could be used more.

Valid points all around. =u=

With Bastien I’m curious to start exploring his past, though I think it will take a lot for him to make the realization. I do need to be more obvious and delve into his past more, though. I’ll readily admit such a fact! XD And is Basfia canon? To my knowledge, Bastien is single!

As for Adelia, I suppose I’m hesitating because I’m waffling around with what I want to do with her. She may not change due to a purpose I have for her, but at the same time I would like her to make a sort of revelation. Regardless, it will be a slow and painful process for both her and me, as I need to be careful how I portray her. XD Considering I’m a writer, I’ll be more mindful of how I write her into chapters. However, since people know she cheated last challenge, she likely won’t cheat again until the people who know she did it are eliminated.

All around, good point and I will work in what I can in these coming threads I do. =u= Thank you!